Areas that my teacher and people in my class said that we did well was that the cinematography that we used throughout the opening sequence was good and that it was relevant to the genre. Another aspect that they said we did well was the placement of our fonts. They said that the way in which we used transitions to make the credits appear on screen was very effective in appealing the audience.
What to improve?
- The voiceover throughout the whole of the opening sequence needs increasing in volume as it almost gets lost within the music
- The last clip needs decreasing in volume as the sound of footsteps coming up the stairs is too loud and distracting.
- The part walking to school takes too long so it needs cutting down slightly
- Cut down the time that the art competition clip is on screen for
- Have the title of the film coming on the screen in 2 parts, maybe even with a sound effect
- The title sequence could be shown in another colour as white may not be appropriate, maybe have it colourful so that its contrasting the idea of the film.
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